Friday, 28 December 2007
Words
Got an idea for my second novel. Its been kicking around for a few years in my head. I still need to work on the plot. It was originally conceived to be a film and so I have broken down the film synopsis into the book. Problem is it reads like a film and film is a different medium to books. With books you can get into characters minds, tell the reader what is happening. With writing a film, you tend not to be able to do that, as its something you show. So you write things like this.
SAM cries as she sees her dead lover.
Now in a book you can go something like this.
Sam looked down. Lying motionless at her feet was Charlie, her lover. The gun was warm in her hands. She retched and threw up into a nearby bin. What had she done. She loved him. She killed him.
Now apart from the name Sam. None of this will make it into my book. For starters its set in space, and is all about a little girl lost.
See you.
Thursday, 27 December 2007
The year comes to an end.
So how was Christmas. It was good, my brother gave me, Veronica Mars Season One, on DVD. Now Veronica is one of my favourite shows. Its whity, intelligent, emotional, and above all if you try to work out the mystery, confusing. The show is about a high school girl who, in her spare time solves crimes. So its a mixture of murder and teen angst. Sounds bad, but surprising its not. Plus its has one of the greatest characters ever written for a TV Show. Logan Echolls. He starts out as an annoying idiot, but as the show progress, we find out more about him, and watch as he develops into well you will have to watch and find out.
So, Voyage of the Dammed then. For months; I was looking forward to seeing David Tennant on the HMS Titanic but it turns out to be a space ship. Am I bothered, to use a forthcoming companions catch phrase. No, I am not bothered in the slightest. Russell T Davis wrote a script. I sat there, literally, on the edge of my seat wanting to know what happends. Who would die, who would live, and what is in level 31. If I could write like him I would be rich. Got to have something to aim for.
On the reading stand. Contract by Simon Spurrier. Not going to say anything yet, mainly as I have only read ten pages, but so far so good. Almost makes me want to be an assassin.
See you all next year.
Unless I blog again.
Bye.
Tuesday, 18 December 2007
Christmas is but a week away
Other than that, going to spend some time painting my miniatures. I am currently playing through the Return of the King sourcebook from Games Workshop and need to get a lot of Knights of Dol Amoroth painted.
Other than that I am going to be working on two things. Getting my book finished is my number one priority, it now stands at 40,000 words which is a lot, however there is still a major rework to comer, and I think it shall now end up being closer to 50,000 and then I am going to send it to publishers, and or agents. Not sure about the latter, but we shall see.
There is a new competition being run by Shizzam magazine for a 3500 steam punk story. I think I am going to enter, but need to think of some ideas first. Got till the end of Feb, so got some time there. Going to replot my vampire novel. Got some great ideas from a friend of mine and so will be throwing them into the mixer.
The final thing I intend to do over Christmas is work on some TV proposals. I have a great idea for some crime stories in the genre of Morse, and Lewis. So intend to get massive amounts of CSI and the rest of Morse in the sales. (Here’s hoping for a buy one get one free offer :) )
Finally I shall leave you with two links. The first is for the author Dave Bishop, stumbled across his blog by accident, he is want I want to be, and that is a free lance writer, and reading his blog, has given me insight into the writing world. The second is Paul Cornell's blog. Now Paul is a Doctor Who writer, having written Father's Day and Human Nature/Family of Blood and by reading his blog, he has got me into some great shows like Heroes, and of course Veronica Mars.
Thursday, 13 December 2007
Its almost Christmas
See you all soon.
Dave.
Saturday, 24 November 2007
Helms Deep
Just wanted to touch base,
See you all soon.
P.S. I am procrastinating far to much on Facebook.
Thursday, 25 October 2007
You won't beat me Mr Murdoch
From a writers point of view, I am a big fan of the flashback sequence as it allows us to get to know characters in a more relaxed setting. Sometimes the flashbacks are rubbish. Take Ana Lucia in season 2. But sometimes they can be really good. My fav character is Charlie, and there is something rather tragic about his flashbacks, he did not have to take heroin, but he failed.
On the bookstand: Still Apocalypse Watch. Its pretty unisipiring stuff from Robert Ludlum. It really does seem that his best stuff is the Bourne Trilogy. Its 800 pages long, and is overly converluted, and quite hard to read. But I shall perservere.
See you all
Saturday, 20 October 2007
Death of a general
Its funny how war goes. Next time Terry, next time.
Friday, 12 October 2007
Its been a while
Monday, 17 September 2007
Links
Your back are you, thats nice.
Sunny days
So we descended, chatted and watched a game of cricket. a Kite was flown and people took photos. Good times were had by all, that were not to last. It got cold, the sun went behind the clouds and we went to church.
What am I talking about, not sure. Just wanted to talk about it.
Friday, 14 September 2007
its done
Friday, 7 September 2007
Spam
Okay Rant over
Thursday, 6 September 2007
20k ish and a 100 pages
Now when I say a hundred pages, its a 100 pages the size the book would be when finished. The size is about the size of your average mass market trade paperback. So I reckon that I may be looking at a 200 page book when I am done.
So going to be off now, Mock the week is on, and I need to laugh.
On the TV: Heroes, again. Got the dvd of series 1 on import, i love heroes. I think its one of the best things in recent years and ranks up there with Firefly, Alias and Lost as well as UK hits like Doctor Who, and Hustle. Only down side is i wish I had written it.
On the IPod: Hard Fi, Once upon a time in the west. Not to sure, liked most of thier first album, which had some good tracks, but in all its not that good yet, however a few more listening shall get my opnion sorted.
Tuesday, 4 September 2007
17K and counting.
I am enjoying it as characters are suddely doing things unexpectdly, and I think they may be making out when I am not looking. Characters these days.
Anyway this was only a brief post to let you know how I am going.
Saturday, 1 September 2007
10k wahoo
8k done, 2K to go
In the mean time I have bought three new Doctor Who novels featuring David Tennant as Doctor number 10 and Martha Jones played by Freema, may start one later. Anyway I am off now to watch the last of the time lords. see you after 10K
3k done, 7k to go
On the ITunes: How to save a Life by a band called The Frey. I have heard this song one and off as I walked into the warehouse at work, love it. Go buy. you know you want to.
Oh and last night I lost completly at bowling, it was rather impressive.
Right back to work. see you when I hit ten k
Thursday, 30 August 2007
It's 1973, almost dinner time, I'm havin hoops.
In other works, I’ve put on hold the short story I have been working on in favour for working on a book for a competition the Times are running with the guy who found JK Rowling. (and yes I did enjoy Deathly Hallows). Its looking good, but there is a long wait, where I can be polishing my manuscript. I just have to write 50k of words. But I have a plot, and I am about to break it into chapters, and begin work tomorrow.
In other news, I have read the new Harry Potter, brilliant. Watched Bourne Ultimatum, Brilliant and see Cov go top of the Championship Brilliant. So my summer has been quite nice, away from work.
On the stero: Life on Mars soundtrack. Now in my opinion a lot of the 70’s was rubbish. However this album gets all of the good ones, like Life on Mars by David Bowie, and Live or Let Die by Paul McCartney with the witty comments of Gene Hunt. Top notch.
Got to go, got to work on some chapers.
See you next week.
Thursday, 5 July 2007
A week is a long time.
Now you may be wondering what am I talking about. Well last week I went to bed thinking about doing one chapter, tonight I am going to bed with two new ideas. Firstly Tony Jordan (yes that one, the one who wrote Hustle, Life on Mars and is the person who has had the biggest impact on Eastenders) has announced a competition, enter the first ten pages of a screenplay and a synopsis and I could win five grand (that’s is half of what I will earn) and a paid commission. Now to be honest it’s the latter that I am most interested in. Getting a commission, whether its Hustle, or any other TV show and having it on my CV is worth more than five grand. So I really want to win.
It also means that I am going to have work incredibly hard to get entered. Hard work yes, pay off very little, and I will be going against a lot of talented, but the feeling that if I can get through the final twenty, and have a workshop with a man of the ability of Tony Jordan, I know I have achieved something. So let the work begin.
Also I have begun plotting ideas for a series of four books, that is a fantasy series, I have some ideas, buzzing in my head, but I am going to need a lot of work to get them sorted before I even put finger to keyboard.
I have also started a new short story, of which I have finished plotting, its an interesting idea and I hope to sell it as well which also will b quite useful. All in all I will have to say the next few months are going to be pretty interesting. But a lot of hard work.
In other news, last night I played my penultimate game in my The Two Towers game. I played as a horde of heroes sallying out from Helms Deep against my friends Terry’s horde of evil Uruk Hai. The game was a victory for me, however while playing, it felt like a Tim Henman game at Wimbledon, the balance of the game swung from side to side, and a well placed spell won the game.
I have just finished watching the Die Hard Trilogy in preparation for Die Hard 4. Die Hard was really good, Die Hard 2 and 3 were ok, but nothing brilliant. We shall wait to see what 4 is like. But the director Len Wisemen was good behind the camera for Underworld and Underworld Eveloution, so we shall see.
I have also watched Scrubs season 5. I will admit that I am very anti American comedy as I don’t find it funny, but Scrubs works because it mixes the serious and the stupid. There are two episodes where we follow the emotional journey of Dr Cox played by J C Mcginlly at the end of disc 3 and I was in awe, that was brilliant writing.,
Its midnight and I have to go to work.
Monday, 25 June 2007
Wahay
Saturday, 23 June 2007
incessant drumming
In other news, I went to the Cricket today, Notts won by six wickets, which sounds like a lot, where as in reality we had three balls of our twenty overs left, and we got the single run needed to get us past Lancashire's total of 163. The match was entertaining, thought I must admit that I never quite under stood the fact, the security stewards removed some inflatable (not stuffed as I proclaimed) animals that were being thrown around to good effect. Why, is it PC gone mad. I don't know.
In good news, I am plotting out a seires of four books and six half parts of a tv show, I have been thinking about since watching Heroes. It's a nice, I just need that spark to make it go work. It will come. I hope.
READING: Just finished Casino Royale by Ian Fleming, though the book and the film share a similar plot and characters, their is a big difference. This is due to the time of the writing and fliming. When written in the early fifties Russia was the big enemy, with people waiting for the comunist empire to sweep all aside. While now adays we have no real enemies like that, just terrorist. Despite this I found it enjoyable though a little dull as the plot was convulted, however I did learn a new card game, Baccarart, which I am itching to try out.
WATCHING: The 4400 seaon 1. I picked this up ages ago from simths and I have finally gotten round to watching it. Billed as the new X Files, I am kind of dissapointed as it has a goof potential (IE 4400 people go missing all over the world (all of which are american) and then reappear, changed) but yet the first episode has a lot to work on. Other .han that, its Star Wars.
Now bed,
Saturday, 16 June 2007
Hello,
In other news I have met Steven Savile recently. He is the author of a trilogy of books for Games Workshop that deal with the Von Carstien family, all who have tried to invade and conquer the empire, and did I mention they were Vampires. Now I am not a big fan of these books, as I find them rather predictable, due to them being based on established background, that I have known about for ten years. However despite this I enjoyed his writing, and looking forward to his next Black Library novel. He was nice and signed my books, and we had five minutes to chat. He offered a bit of advice, which was better than your standard, read widely and write a lot, which also happens to be good advice. So I am pumped about writing,
So much so that I have been busy tapping away on my novel, not especially pleased about what I have written, but I need to rewrite all most of all of it. The novel’s plot I think is interesting, but will appeal to a niche audience. I am not sure if I am going to submit it, but we shall see.
I have also been tapping away on ideas for a fantasy world, its coming along fine, and its been highly amusing thinking up of names. I quite like Ja’Khan, however if it stays as a name we shall see. My script has finished the rewrite, and now is with a few people who are reading it. I am now waiting for their response. Its been an enjoyable rewrite, as I learnt another writing tip from the Master of the Screen Russell T Davies. I learnt such a big thing that I could keep redrafting, and never get to the point of where I can say something is done. So it will soon be submitted, and we shall see if it gets picked up.
I have just finished reading the Beach by Alex Garland, now I have raved about this book, and its truly is great, however the ending seemed a bit rushed and jilted. You’ve read three hundred odd pages, and it all kicks off in the final fifty pages. This is my only major critcism on the book I enjoyed.
Watching, of course it has to be Doctor Who. Steven Moffarts episode Blink was scary. The surprise ending of Utopia had me in awe. Oh how a week seems such a long time. Still no harm in a little wait. I had to wait sixteen years to get a doctor.
Anyway bed, now. See you all soon.
Sunday, 27 May 2007
The Month of May was not kind to me.
However recent events have thrown a stick in my works. I have been writing a script, which now thanks to the kidnapping of Madeline McCann. Is not going to be approved when sent in due to kidnapping of a teen being a big part of it. With the recent rewrites of similar plot lines for Corrie and Eastenders I am a bit stuck. However I rather have that little girl back with her parents than my script on telly.
I have been reading the Beach by Alex Garland, tis very good. It’s a look at what life is like when we remove all of life’s excess. When I say excess I mean technology, and is very enjoyable. Well written and fast moving, you can easily find that you have read 200 pages when you were only going to read a chapter. I recommend it.
Also have seen pirates of the Caribbean 3. Very good. Much better than the second to be honest. The second was a character piece, and spent far to long introducing all the main protagonists, while the third was a romp from Singapore, to the ends of the earth and back to shipwreck cove. Very funny, great acting from Johnny Deep go see it. Now.
I am off to church and then when I return I am going to bash out a basis for my new four book idea. I have got to stop thinking and get down to writing.
Friday, 4 May 2007
Update
So I have been a bit quiet, but I have been working hard at work. It’s stock take at the time of writing and I have been working getting all the accounts up to date, and now am sitting not doing a lot entering the data ate s it comes in from the warehouse.
While I have been working hard on entering the Black Library’s short story competition. I have an idea, I have a way of killing a planet, I have my synopsis and my writing piece. Now I just needed to get it proof read, (thanks Lorna) and now I need to enter it.
In other news I am working on a website, to showcase my writing. Using the wonders of my Mac and Iweb it should be up shortly, well as soon as I build it that is. But using Iweb it won’t take to long ☺ watch this space to get the address.
I am currently reading through I Jedi which is obviously from the Star Wars universe. its alright, I am reading it to mainly take ideas for a small synopsis I am preparing. It will probably never been made, but I like the idea with. It’s a decent read and is easy to read, but I think the fact that its also set in the same time with a trilogy of books that come under the title The Jedi Academy trilogy. I read these at the turn of the century, and so can remember some details, and thanks to Wiki I can find out the rest. I am now looking for the Thrawn trilogy books on ebay.
In terms of Doctor Who it has gone from strength to strength I feel that the two Dalek episodes were a bit weaker, but they were still very good. Especially like the Harry Potter reference in the Shakespeare Code. Can’t wait for book 7.
Anyway this is this blog post over and out.
Thursday, 19 April 2007
Were back
Macs rule, its official. My 22nd birthday present is a nice 13-inch black macbook and I love it. No other word to describe it. I am lying in bed as I type this.
I have still not heard anything back from Big Finish about my Who Story I entered earlier this year, but they are looking at making the announcement at the end of May, another month. No fair. However in between then and now, I have to devise and enter a short story comp or two. One is for the previously announced SFX comp and one for the Black Library, which is based on the subject of planet killing.
I am also keeping myself busy with thinking of ideas for a short film. I have recently got the passion for film-making and I am going to have to give it a go. Watch this space.
Oh and work is taking me for pizza on Monday. ☺
Monday, 9 April 2007
Tis Finished
Did you enjoy The Shakespeare Code. I know I did, and apart from a new found appreciation for all things Shakespearean, I am again rather up for Script Writing. However even better Project One has now got a complete draft. So now all I need to do is to revise, get people to proof read it, so my dodgy spelling is ok. And then to read it out loud to make sure, that the speeches do work.
Now I just need to get motivated.
In other news I have now got a shiny black mac book coming for my birthday, and I can’t wait to play on it. I just have to wait till Friday. There is a new single out by
The third book in the Power of Five series by Anthony Horowitz has been released and I have devoured it. The series has an interesting premise of what if our real world had a supernatural element to it. He has written a decent book, and though does not focus on the main characters from previous books. Is very good and I am looking forward to book 4, which is Harry Potter sized so I am looking forward.
Finally we also have the trailer for the Bourne Ultimatum. This is the third film in the Bourne franchise, which is one of my favourite, with each film getting better. So watch this http://craigbe.typepad.com/movieblog/2007/03/the_bourne_ulti.html and I shall see you soon, after a driving lesson and redraft. Now can I force myself to loose a character.
Bye
Monday, 2 April 2007
An education from the Master. (not that one)
So as I am typing this I am about ten pages from completeting my script for project one. It’s scary, now that after years, of bashing ideas and getting the style this is going to be the first that one gets submitted and most likely rejected. So I’m excited and nervous.
However on the positive side of things Doctor Who came roaring back in on Saturday night with a cracker of an episode in Smith and Jones. Just watching Russell T Davis’s script was an eye opener for me. As I thought about how he wrote this scene this way to get the new companion (Martha) over as the sensible one, and did this to get that, and so on. It was an education. So I am really looking forward to poring over my script over the next few days, reworking scenes so that instead of writing a script as one would write a novel. The visuals show the story. I get the feeling that this script is going to work out longer than I was expecting, which means I have to think about maybe loosing that subplot or even losing a character.
Trust me having six main characters running around doing things, while focusing on two out of the six, really does give me appreciation why Jon Nathan Turner killed of Matthew Waterhouse’s character Adric.
On the novel front I have just finished reading the first book in the Fiends on the Eastern Front trilogy, and to be honest it left me very disappointed. The book was gradually building up for a rather dark ending. And it did give a rather dark ending, it was just that the action kicked up a notch in the final three chapters and left me feeling somewhat lacking. Oh well. Going to give that a break and read a book set in the Necromunda game world from Games Workshop.
Other than that DVD recommendation is Final Fantasy 7: Advent Children. It’s a continuation of the game and is highly enjoyable with great graphics. The story though good was a bit weak in places and I felt that it relied on its visual, which were stunning. Done on a computer they looked really nice, I just felt that it needed a tighter plot and would have been a lot better. However it did get me playing the game again.
Wednesday, 28 March 2007
Houston we have a problem
Well not really a problem, more of a fix. I am an addict. There you go I have admitted it. I am addicted to playing World of Warcraft (hereafter known as WOW). I am currently running around in Stranglethorn Vale, with my level 37 and a half rogue. However in January just before the Burning Crusade was released, Blizzard updated WOW and it crashes my machine, with a serious crash of blue screen doom. So I can not play WOW without it killing my machine, every time I go into stealth.
So since then instead of wasting my life in front of a screen moving my character around (and I was so close to a mount) I have begun doing other things. For starters I have got into the swinging of painting my wargaming figures. I am currently in the middle of a campaign based on the
And more importantly I have begun to play on my Playstation 2. Back in 2001 I bought Final Fantasy 7 and I got about half way through disc one and I have not got any further of this three disc epic. I have a whole host of games I have hardly played on. So I can safely say that losing World of Warcraft has been a good thing. I am now having a great time and being really productive.
Oh and I am now on the home straight of Project number one. I am working on the thrilling conclusion that involves action sequence. Even thinking about it I can imagine the budget being spent here.
Also Doctor Who is back on Saturday. Doctor Who is the only decent thing on telly. So watch it and enjoy, or else we will get the Daleks round.
Right, I'm off to get some Final Fantasy 7 in. Tomorrow I go for the last push on the script and watch the Quatermass Remake.
Thursday, 22 March 2007
Oooh
Well after perusing the Black Library Forums at lunch, I have noticed that the magazine SFX is running a pulp short story comp. So count me in.
Already I have plans of bring a character that I once used in a campaign I ran for the miniature war-game Inquisitor, who I like so much I adapted into a novel/film. :)
So aside from my ramblings on my career as a writer I hope to fill you in on what I am doing in general. So here goes
At the moment two things are keep me interested. Firstly I have been reading a book called Fiends on the Eastern Front by David Bishop. Technically this is a omnibus which has three books which makes up the trilogy, which in turn are based on an old 2000AD comic strip, which I now want go to get my hands on.
The basic premise is that during Hitler's attempt to conquer the Soviet Block, three brothers fighting on the front line run into vampires lurking on the battlefield. Now I am enjoying this book for two reasons. Firstly it is fulfilling my lust for good Vampire stories. I am a fan of the undead, for no other reasons than they are just really cool. But also I have read a many a vampire story that has disappointed me in some how. Secondly the author has gone and done his research and made it as historically accurate as you can, when your lead character are investigating into blood sucking fiends, which has reawakened my passion for History and historical fiction.
So go buy for an enjoyable read.
The other thing, it’s now only 9 or so days till Doctor Who returns, bring it on.
Wednesday, 21 March 2007
Its a funny old thing
Authors always say that sometimes stories take on a life of their own and characters do things they were never expecting.
Recently I have found this to be true. While writing my novel, trying to get two characters one of who is the main character to relate, even though one of them will be dead within the next few pages, is incredibly hard, and then something happened, and they clicked.
Also one of my side characters in my short story I am writing who originally was going to be a bit more timid and less confrontational has stormed into the centre of the story with magic and a tiny killing spree. Laying down the law and generally saying, your doing my will or you die.
It's amassing what characters can do when they your not watching.
Friday, 16 March 2007
Day One
And welcome to my Blog. I shall keep it uptodate with my way to becoming a best selling author.
So I shall give you a brief intro to what I am working on.
- Project 1: Working on a script for a 90 minute tv adventure drama aimed at a family audience.
- Project 2: Novel- A supernatural thriller set in Nottingham. It has Vampires, and well thats all I should say
- Project 3: Short Story: A Short Story hopefully to go in one of many fantasy magazines.
- Project 4: Film: I have just begun the vague basis of a plot for a film, which contains UFO abduction.
All rather exciting, find out more soon.